College Admission Essays For Adults
For many adults considering a return to college, the most intimidating part of the application process is writing the personal essay. Many have not written an essay since they left school, and they find it unnerving to attempt this kind of writing. But remember, between email, Facebook and other forms of new communication, you could be writing more often – albeit in shorter form – than you did in high school.
Youressay is the best way to let a school know who you are. For traditional high school students applying to college, the essay is a chance to set themselves apart from the thousands of other teenagers seeking a spot in a freshmen class. This usually means writing about their volunteer work, internships, sports teams, community service projects, or other hobbies or interests. Adult learners, however, are at an advantage in writing their personal statements, because they have many more experiences and ideas to draw upon.
When crafting your personal statement, keep these tips in mind:
1. Read the essay question carefully to be sureyou understand the topic you are supposed to tackle. Some adult undergraduate programs or graduate schools have opened-ended questions, such as tell us why you want to return to school or why are you interested in pursuing this degree. Others, however, are more specific, such as write about a time you failed at something and what you learned from that experience.
2. Develop an organizing theme or idea to draw upon, whether answering a specific question or writing a general essay about your background. Sometimes this central idea comes in a flash of inspiration, but more often it comes after mulling the topic over. Then boil this idea down to one sentence – your thesis statement. You'll want to choose a theme that truly reflects who are, but also offers enough material to build an essay upon. Some themes, for example, that might be good for an adult student essay could be: why being a parent will make me a better student; how my current job has prepared me to return to school; or how earning this degree will help me fulfill my dream.
3. Unless you are applying to particular program that involves a specialized kind of writing, such as an M.F.A. in poetry or a screenwriting program, stick to the traditional essay format. This means you will write an opening paragraph that builds up to your thesis statement, followed by several supporting paragraphs, which elaborate on your overall theme. The concluding paragraph should restate and summarize the content in the previous paragraphs.
4. Remember that the personal statement is a chance to show off both your writing skills and your motivation to become a student. Don't undermine your effort with careless mistakes. After writing the essay, set it aside for a few days, and then take a look at it with fresh eyes, aiming to improve it through revising and editing.
5. Once you are finished, be sure to have someone proofread your work. This could be a friend or family member. Be sure to choose someone who is supportive of your decision to return to school, as well a person who has good writing skills. When making any final revisions, spell check and reread the essay a final time before submitting. You do not want to accidentally insert an error into your work during the last round of changes.
Remember, the essay is just one part of the overall process of researching and applying to schools. It is central to any effort to go back to college, but make sure you also complete the other application materials with care and in a timely manner.
Here, you'll find tips and advice for writing admissions essays and personal statements when you haven't been in school for some time.
Returning students can be especially apprehensive about the essay portion of the application package. It may have been years since you wrote an essay, and now you're being asked not only to write but to write in the particular style that is effective in the college selection process. However, you can manage this situation like a pro by following our expert tips for returning students.
1. Highlight your experience
When working with returning students, one of the biggest concerns they tend to have is about being a non-traditional student and competing with traditional students. In fact, colleges are looking to create a diverse student body, and they are genuinely interested in including returning students. The reason for this is that you can contribute to classroom discussions and study groups in a way that your traditional counterparts cannot.
When writing your essays, emphasize that you have the organizational skills and dedication needed to excel in college. Most of all, let the admissions officers know that you, as an adult, have confidence that you have chosen the right path and are fully committed to completing your degree program.
2. Remember to show instead of telling
This advice applies to all applicants, but it is especially important for returning students. With more background on which to draw upon for your essays, you can paint a more vivid picture of your skills and potential. Skills from your personal and professional life can translate well to the collegiate environment, so help the admissions officers see how you have formed a strong sense of self and a meaningful set of abilities that you can use as a student.
3. Focus on your adult life
While the seeds of your reasons for returning to school may have been planted when you were younger, the admissions officers are much more interested in who you are now. It's fine to mention briefly moments from your childhood or adolescence, but these should be limited to a phrase within a sentence. Instead, use experiences and situations from your adult life that reflect your character and passion for your chosen program of study.
4. Help the admissions officers understand why you are returning to school
Why now? The admissions officers will look for a cogent answer to this question. Have you reached a plateau in your current career? Are you looking to change fields? Were there circumstances in your past that are now resolved, giving you the ability to focus on school?
There's no reason to be anything but honest in your response here. If you were downsized, let the admissions officers know. If you were working in a certain job out of necessity but are now pursuing your dreams, tell them. Show the admissions officers that you now have time in your schedule to dedicate to school.
5. Show enthusiasm for the school/program
Take the time to thoroughly research each school before you apply. In addition to the school's website, you might want to write a couple of emails to professors whose work interest you as well as reach out to administrators to answer any questions you may have. Also, most colleges have a non-traditional student union, and you may want to get in contact with them to understand their perspective of the school.
6. Don't avoid talking about your adult responsibilities
As a returning student, you might not have the luxury of leaving a job, family or mortgage behind to pursue your studies. In your essays, you can write about how the program is perfect because you can continue in your career. If you are moving with a family, help the admissions officers see that your partner/children are supportive and enthusiastic about the opportunity.
7. Reach out for help
If you feel that you still aren't sure about the content of your essay or the quality of your writing, seek out some other opinions. Is there someone at your work who has recently returned to school? Someone who graduated from your chosen program? Professional help is also available, whether you would like step-by-step help or just a final polish to ensure that your essay is error-free.
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